Danny Baldonado

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Mary Erangey submitted media.

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Quite an undertaking for such an animated music video with so many diverse art styles and references.  Not exactly my style of music, but pretty poppy, catchy, and feel good. 
Here are some little things that seemed a little out of place or raised and eyebrow for me:

00:16-00:18 : there's a weird quick edit in the transition from your animated face singing to the dinosaur to the man walking.  It's a little jarring/confusing.
01:26-01:31 : during the multi-screen displays of the singer, there is an overlay of whitish circle with lines through it in the upper left corner of the frame and it's not clear what that is or represents.  It only seems to distract from the rest of the image.
02:35-02:40 : i'm not crazy about the wavy transition/morphing effect of the singer from the animated world to the real life person.  One thought that comes to mind is to maybe use the rain to wash away the animated/painted person and reveal the real/physical person.  All that being said the current transition works- i get the gist.
03:08-03:13 : I don't like the "scrambled" letter reveal of the title of the song to eventually spell out "Blue Umbrella".  It seems really cheesy and rudimentary that it takes the production value down to me- where i think a simple fade up of the letters would be simpler and more effective.

Ok, enough critique of the rough stuff or things that didn't work as well as the rest of the video.  So that also means that the large majority of the video "works".  It's playful and fun and sweet.

Hope this helps, but let me know if you have any further questions.

peace,
dannyB