There are parts I really like and parts I' sort of "eh" on. Reminds me of Passion Pit and the instrumentation is great. Much of the melody is nice but the last half of the hook needs some work melodically, along with a few lyrics sounding a bit "pitchy". The vocal mix also needs some finessing. This could be a very strong song if these things were tightened up a bit, definitely a radio-worthy track. Just a few hurdles, along with it's likeness to other bands, that could stand in the way.
Love the video. My initial response was that I could see this on the more highly trafficked art and design blogs such as This Is Colossal, Juxtapose, Design Boom, Beautiful Decay, Indulgd, and BOOOOOOOM. I could also see this on MTVu and MTV Hive for the college demographic. As well as lifestyle and tech blogs like Boing Boing and Gizmodo.