- We Are: The Guard (Benjamin Groff)
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- Los Angeles, CA
Hey OMEN, Thanks for the submission. Yeah really nice job and really great sounding production / mix etc. I think the song is definitely in the good category and voice sounds great. For me on a song level I think for some constructive comments I might look at the lyric in the chorus: I'll think of you think of you When your with her your with her But I can't take no more No I can't take no more Like some times lyrics work fine just saying what they're saying but often i think it's better if you can put it into a metaphor or say that as the message but just say it in a different way and have some things that are just a little out of the ordinary and juicy. From a song perspective that's something I thought could be a little better. If you ever want to check out an amazing lyric writing book, check out Pat Pattison's work via Berklee ... he was my mentor and as a singer/songwriter I think you might dig it. Thanks for the submission! Benjamin.
Hey Mike...nice song. There's not too much I could add as far as feedback. But you have drums (ride and a hh?) on the track but I'm curious why there isn't a kick or maybe a snar? It might help drive the song a little more or delineate the sections. Thanks for the submission though...feel free to keep them coming as we do occasionally find new songs we love her to post to BitCandy. Tx...Benjamin.
Hey Dorsey the Wise...Nice chorus, great production and mix! Sounds like you guys are heading in the right direction. I'm not sure it's right as far as being in our lane to publish on BitCandy as we are a little more on the indie side and I feel this song is a little more mainstream. My only suggestion would be maybe a more signature concept / title for the chorus. Like instead of "Waiting on You" which feels like the central statement of the song...is there a metaphor for that lyrically that might pop more?