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I review music, curate live shows, and create playlists that track the best emerging music. Obsessed with Pop and R&B and creating movie moments to music IRL. Creator of Kaiotic Music, freelance bookings at The Paper Box NYC, previous contributor to Bowlegs Music.
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There are a lot of good elements in this song already. The vocals are nice, and your choices for the synth sounds in the instrumentation are good too. The issues I have with this are more about mixing and nuance. It needs to be romanticized and dramaticized. The hollowed out moments need to be more stark, and the lush moments more soaring. I would also highlight certain elements more- the sort of rising arpeggio synth is great, I may bring it more to the foreground.