Black CaesarX

Black CaesarX

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Black CaesarX

CEO and Founder of CPirateNetwork LCC Interactive Streaming Platforms for Artist/Fan Video Chat Show
Founder of media Network. CPirateNetwork Entertainment and Video Host. I'm a social media specialist. Especially when it comes to optimizing the content you put out over twitter, Hashtagging. My forte for facebook (our verified pages) and Google+ also.  I am also familiar with instagram.

Coming out of the box with a brash, creative style that in the Hip Hop community has given me the stature of a "Triple OG" simply written as 3XOG. I was an ol' skool bass guitar player in a band from the time I was 13 years old and in the 8th grade during the intro of the Beatles and played my first gig at a Top Less joint the same year going forward for $100 a night. Technology and social media in music is my passion and I wield it with the ease of Jimi Hendrix on solo during Purple Haze!

If you've read this far here's a little history for you...

Raised in The Bronx, New York, I grew up during the civil rights era of the 60's and strangely enough, the gangs in his native "Edenwald" projects were interracial. Education took him from The Bronx, through Brooklyn, where he attended the prestigious Brooklyn Technical High School. He traveled through the South Bronx during the tumultuous late 70's, when the South Bronx was burning and where Hip Hop was being born. 
These elements are what have come to define my explosive chameleon like style, playing the electric bass guitar; Avant Garde in that respect too. Later as a concept I auditioned to play bass on live sets with rappers and DJ's, to add a heavy low frequency bass, that is now popular to live sessions. And in around 1982 I did so for Afrika Bambaataa, but he was not ready for that.
music tech, emerging artists, digital media
hip-hop, indie rock, rock, classical, country, blues
Greenville, NC

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Kyle Foti submitted media.

Too Fast by Kidd Niro

Black CaesarX

Very good lyrics and composition. I could definitely hear this being played in the clubs.

Liam Pugh submitted media.

Moon Blip by Liam Pugh

Black CaesarX

I like the arrangement very interesting and different. I thought the vocal could be louder in the mix. I'll give it ╭∩╭∩╭∩╭∩ (︶︿︶)∩╮∩╮∩╮∩╮8THUMBS UP.

Would def like to hear more and think you should invest in a quality studio mix or higher quality of Soundcloud.

Great job all together.  OOhhhhhhh yes keep working on it and bring the vocals out front.

SideBar Management submitted media.

If Ya Luv Him by Pat Pat

Black CaesarX

WOW wow woweeee wow wow 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 This is a def smoker don't change a thing. The beat is solid and driving with a very interesting lyrical flow.

When the rap starts it just seals the deal. You can go really far with this style. If your interested in going and moving further with our out of the box style promotions above the noise just message us here would love to work with you.

Outstanding and a really great job.

Chris larson submitted media.

Lauren by Chris Larson

Black CaesarX

Sorry for not getting to this sooner had some technical issues with my computer getting access to Fluence.

Technically proficient and the song composition is good. The only area I would have liked to hear some improvement on is I felt the lead and backup vocal tracks were a little bit under the music.

I would have like to hear the lead vocals a little bit more out front along with the backing vocals layered behind them.

Otherwise you've got a great song here.

If you are looking for more in depth promotion to get you above the noise in social media contact me via email to we have a verified facebook page at

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Black CaesarX

The song is good although I don't generally like or do Trap Rap it is well constructed and has potential. From what I can hear on the youtube it sounds like your vocal track could be mastered to a higher quality to match that of the beats.

You can make the first move on looking for it to be promoted our verified page is on facebook at Let's start with seeing you post there and go from there.

Qyko submitted media.

Black CaesarX

WOW 😆 This I think is by far your best work. Should definitely be a hit in the clubs. The instrumentation and timings are superior. The only small issue I have is the horn sounding embellishments on the top over midranges is a little too tangy for my taste. Just a hair more midrange and base eq'ed into would make it perfect.

I will be using our new social media RiteKit tool for share this scheduled over the next 10day or so and uploading the song to our 24/7 streaming radio.

BTW our new site is now and the streamer can be found at

Again whenever you guys are ready we can also set up streaming listening parties or interviews through our various platforms that go over twitter facebook etc along with engaging chat interaction with your fans hosted by us at CPirate


Qyko submitted media.

Under My Skin by Qÿko

Black CaesarX

Great job! Your work is improving. The vocal little break in there is very interesting along with the audio effects sounds. I would love to hear a little more of that in future songs breaking up the monotony of the machine like music.

It is very nice to see a group progressing in talent, hopefully I can find your twitter handle in here or on Soundcloud and the offer still stands to do a live interview show with me when your ready.


Qyko submitted media.

Black CaesarX

Not as exciting and interesting for me as the last work I reviewed for you, but may be the kind of work that needs to grow on a person.

The composition of the music is very detailed and audibly excellent and should probably work well with what I imagine is your specific audience that has grown to love your work.

Once again getting you on a live video interaction would probably be really great for you and your fans to better engage with you and find out more about what you do let's arrange that and contact me at regarding that.


Qyko submitted media.

Black CaesarX

Great job on this. Has a very wide range of emotions that it covers, making it transcend from a musical composition into a work of art. 

I can tell this was very well thought out and would make the perfect addition as accompanying music to our avant-garde art slide show. If it can be embedded you will find it here - as well as our twitter @CPirateNetwork and facebook 

Kayla Thompson submitted media.

Black CaesarX

Whoa nice serious beat on this track. Don't listen to them fools. The vocals are perfect for it and I've been on the game since 1964 as a musician.

Google me up on Facebook our verified page CPirateNetwork, I'm a big influencer there now more than twitter. While you do your video get us the mp3 to we'll put together a quick a/v and tag you as SoundCloud won't play in Facebook anymore. You really got looking forward to hearing from you.

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Black CaesarX

This works very well as an experimental Hip Hop work with its very unique and different stylings and flow, however I think it would gain more traction in an American market if the time was taken to subtitle it as I believe this is in French.

The inflections come across but Americans would want to know the Lyrics to so perhaps making this a Lyric video with large lyric graphics would work well.

Also it is a little long given the average YouTube video attention span is about 2:30 mins, so perhaps some of the repetitive parts can be shortened.

All in all very good job and I would give this a 7 out of a possible 10. Keep up the good works and hit us up on our new verified Facebook page

morland gryder submitted media.

Locus of Control by Clast

Black CaesarX

YEAH Yeah yeaaahhhh that's what I'm talking about baby. This is hot avantgarde out of the box music a work of fresh air on this stale music scene. Very well put together and think it would definitely be a big draw with the alternative music crowd.

Let's talk here in private messages I've got a brand new concept I've used before with artists that goes across twitter, facebook websites and allows the listener to purchase, so would give you another promoted avenue, that we bot could earn revenue and exposure from. My social media out lets know me as an influencer, but I am now switching to a more alternative style than commercial style, where creativity creates economy returns. 

Great job on the music again.



Carlton Carpenter II submitted media.

Black CaesarX

Whoa sorry missed the original notice until I saw the reminder being rather busy getting back into digital art and upgrading Linux system computer, but once I started listening and looking at my art works on my studio wall, the music started jiving with the spatiality in my works. The beat is excellent and the lyrics just plain Badd Ass, worth listening to multiple times to get the full flavor.

If you send me a copy I will definitely play it on my streaming video radio channel which is moving into more of the music I listen to as a Fine Artist while doing works. Also hit me up on twitter @bcxog "BlackCaesarX OG" my music aka. Would love to have you up on our live video chat show, where you can tell all your fans to come up and do an exclusive interview session for record.

Keep up the works this is really good art form.

Jullian Vuitton submitted media.

Black CaesarX

Wow this really had a great beat great presentation music was really live loved it immensely couldn't wait thought it wasn't over it still wanted to hear more. I think you got a hot great tune here wouldn't change a thing it's really rock and rockin on out thanks a lot for submitting this one

Eter The Soul Company submitted media.

Black CaesarX

Great job in sound quality of all the instruments. Although a rather short sample of song it should make a good Country Music Rock crossover hit. Nothing I would change here has the right appeal and formula.

I will tweet this out, for more in depth promotion and appearance on our interactive Video chat show like we did with "BlackCaesar's Stone Soup 12/12 S1E4 Feat @byDavidRosen HD" and would hope for a better audio like your recording Lol. email:

Blake Graham submitted media.

Black CaesarX

Good thing I didn't turn down the review because of money Lol. You have a good song here although I though the intro could be a little shorter to capture the attention of the listener.

I'll give the song a spin on our streaming player out on and if you can from a twitter log in we are doing a show tonight at 7pm EDT that gives exposure on video, chat platform live. 

#Blab Pilot "@bcXog Xhow LIVE" 7p EDT prod by @rob_hix

David Rosen submitted media.

Gravity (Music Video) by David Rosen

Black CaesarX

WOW as an artist as well as a musician this work is fantastic. All of the elements both visually and musically kept me me fascinated. In my mind although not having any vocals I could hear where they could be and hear a male voice singing them. Your choice of animated graphics also works well with the title giving the idea of gravity and keep the viewer transfixed. I will definitely place the video up to our website and the audio on our xstream channel. Great work. 

Tony Banks submitted media.

Roller Coaster by Tony Banks feat. Cleva Thoughts

Black CaesarX

This is good solid song with just two things that it off for me, at about 40 secs in the bass hits a like minor note that just doesn't flow well with the key and then shortly after there's a vocal with a low growl kind of augggghhhh sound. Those two elements removed from the song along with the good lyrics it has and tight female verse makes this an excellent radio and club play song.

Joel Rekiel submitted media.

Good Thing feat. Hypnautic by Sam Hozdulick

Black CaesarX

Excellent, very well done audio and vocals were crystal. Rap vocals fit the song to a tee and the studio mix was one of quality especially in getting the singing out at just the right amount ahead of the music.

Surely would make a good club song.

Mixologist Mikk submitted media.

Uh-Oh by Viktoria x Mixologist Mikk

Black CaesarX

Great club sounding song. Has an international quality to the beat and whispering vocal tracks. MIXOLOGIST MIKK's spitting is a perfect counterpoint to VIKTORIA's searing vocals. Looking for this duo to go a long way in the new modern club music scene.

Chad Riddersen submitted media.

Love Me Like The Weekend. by Hundred Handed

Black CaesarX

The beat and the lyrics are very catchy. Could really see this song catching on as a weekend anthem. Solo is a good quality one at just about the right length moving towards a climatic ending.

Would definitely recommend for radio airplay.

Michael (Nawt) submitted media.

The Racism I Go Through by Michael (Nawt) Nhat

Black CaesarX

WOW Just what the doctor ordered. Very innovative I love this approach, while the subject matter was serious, it brought a smile to face just after going some racial prejudiced talk on social media, that most people just don't get. You had a unique uncanny way of revealing the truth about peoples labeling and invalidation techniques.

My only complaint especially for Vevo is that the vocal audio sounded a bit over driven? 

Otherwise an excellent avant-garde work. I will certainly place this on my reverbnation video player for Worldwide streaming consumption and #HashTag humble brag, if BlackCaesar says it's hot people know to rely on that.

David Rosen submitted media.

Never (Music Video) by David Rosen

Black CaesarX

WOW you did it again. This time the visual story is so well put together, that it goes back to the style of Chaplin where it's so powerful words aren't necessary. The music, although ethereal is so well constructed that it constructs the story in ones mind, conveying the thoughts through notes. The best and only way as an artist I can describe the successful way you have of conveying a message stripped down to the bare essentials so that only pure beauty emerges! 

Preston Flynn submitted media.

grade school games by Focal Point

Black CaesarX

Nice lite hearted music track fitting very appropriately with your graphics. However it is slightly noticeable that there appears to be a small pause in between looping elements.

I think an nice vocal track whether sung or spoken would work nice in here and perhaps help to mask the space in looping. All in all very good work sticking to the theme.

Carl-Marcus Gidlöf submitted media.

Black CaesarX

ⓢⓗⓞⓤⓣⓞⓤⓣ※ⓣⓞ BRONTOS BY EMMECOSTA: EXCELLENT actually a short under 5 minute work of art,
╭∩╭∩╭∩╭∩╭∩ (︶︿︶)∩╮∩╮∩╮∩╮∩╮10THUMBS UP. The work stands as a juxtaposition of elements of both audio and video in conjunction with human elements in contrast to a desolate landscape of an era past, that is slowly but surely reclaiming  a human made barrier, or is it really reclaiming the souls of the artists captured in the changing landscape of symmetrical and asymmetrical shifting panoramas?

Much is left to the human imagination, as much more is answered and intimated by the melancholy perfectly constructed metaphors of both visual and audio elements, allowing us to process a perception derived from a world of both fact and fantasy.

In conclusion this is an Avant-garde work of epic proportions destined to be a short cinematic classic.

Well done
Carlos Romero founder/CEO of both Ikohaus Avant-garde artists - CPirateNetwork LLC 

George Chanin submitted media.

Needles by Midcity

Black CaesarX

Huzzah this is a really great hott heavy metal song. It has all the elements to make it a hit standard. The intro, hook/solo are all the right length to make this a really interesting work, that the average metal fan should love with the freshness it brings to the hard rock world.

Now we are a #BadAss music Network that stretches globally and just got powered on a new platform, where your guys can come on up into our state of the art Live Video/Interview/Chat area and really get exposure, especially in the US and abroad.

Make sure to hit me up, I'm Black Caesar and on twitter find me at @bcXog and we'll make that happen ASAP. Just what the doctor ordered.

Roger Metcalf submitted media.

Ruby Rose Fox - "Die Pretty" by Ruby Rose Fox

Black CaesarX

Not bad. Nice pop sound to the music reminding me of my old early band days back in 1964 The Ventures were very popular. Guitar parts, drums, echo and reverb were all tastefully done, however I had to search my mind in terms of the audio to see what was stopping the song from going over the top. 

Towards the end I finally figured out the vocals were a little too evenly eq'ed to the instrumental track. I think if you could push the vocals out front more, with a little more weight at the bottom. At the very end of the song you can hear a snatch of that as the vocal takes the song out.

I still will be playing this video on our CPirateNetwork ReverbNation channel so great work overall.

Where you described in DESCRIPTION

This is the official music video for the Ruby Rose Fox single "Die Pretty." I'm interested in feedback on the music itself, but most interested in promoting the band and the single on a larger scale than we can do with Boston-based media alone. 

I can def do that with the Global reach we have hit me out on twitter our main media device at @bcXog and your also right on time because I'm in the process of bringing back and beta testing on a new platform our live Black Caesar on camera interview show. Check us out your in!

Veronica Diaz submitted media.

Black CaesarX

Wow it was as if unpeeling the future. Every twist and turn had a new fresh and excitable discovery to be made. Very well planned and composed. Should be a definite hit in the club and on the dance floor. The ending was unsuspected but added a very nice memorable twist.

There is nothing I can say that needs corrections, I'm just glas that there are some artists willing to explore that avnt-garde in music. Great job. Going to play it on our reverbnation widgets particularly one at Looking forward to hearing more from you.

Fili Tha submitted media.

Thaquim's Guitaer by 1. Discoforticut

Black CaesarX

WOW - Now I don't care what anybody else is telling you, your music is probably way to far many years ahead of them. This is right up my alley especially as I consider myself an Avant-garde, artist, musician, filmmaker. The contemporary artists have elevated me to understanding my skills as a Grand Master, so I am telling you, you have found a BREAKTHROUGH in music on the order of Jackson Pollock changing the art world from imitators of Salvador Dali. Stay on your course and path and enjoy what your doing it's great.

Melodic, while being hip and meditational all at the same time. The hook is a monster bro only superseded by the return to it at the ending of the song.

Overall - ╭∩╭∩╭∩╭∩╭∩ (︶︿︶)∩╮∩╮∩╮∩╮∩╮10THUMBS UP ℬℒ ∀☪Ҟ☪ᗩᗴ§ᗩℜ✘✌

Steve Moore submitted media.

Revolt by The Unravelling

Black CaesarX

Not bad, a couple of points however that could vastly improve where your going with this. First although that's what you might like, the tempo is a little dragging. If you up the BPM during main parts of the song, the listener won't be like comeon' let's get this baby pumpin. The guitar parts are nice duettos and heavy metal riffs that really fit during solo's (hooks I think you guys call them now) and elsewhere. Vocals are good with proper levels, but what's up with the drummer?????? No offense but did he forget to bring the whole kit? Double deep pumping bass drum is nice, but rolling through a complete set with snares and toms woulda put this over the top and especially if he had that Qissssshhhhhh Qissssshhhh of the cymbals I could here in my head but weren't there.

Overall pretty BadAss good! 
FINAL SCORE: ╭∩╭∩╭∩ (︶︿︶)∩╮∩╮∩╮ 6THUMBS UP ℬℒ ∀☪Ҟ☪ᗩᗴ§ᗩℜ✘ rated✌

David Bell Jr. submitted media.

Time Machine (Prod. By NOBULL) by Block Scholars

Black CaesarX

Whoa! All the elements I look for in a good ol' skool Hip Hop Jammie. But with pleasant surprise of some blistering harmonies. Whole song laid in the pocket and I knew it was on smash within the first 5 seconds a big plus to me cuz that's how long you have to grab peoples attention in the noise out here today.

Now the lyrics were a major plus because they allowed me to place myself in the lead singer or should I say messengers place and actually think about those same scenarios if this song was downloadable I would play it on my reverbradio Network.

Overall: ╭∩╭∩╭∩╭∩╭∩ (︶︿︶)∩╮∩╮∩╮∩╮∩╮10THUMBS UP ℬℒ ∀☪Ҟ☪ᗩᗴ§ᗩℜ✘✌  you want it to be heard send me an mp3 plus cover art 799wX600h px my network on site connected to ReverbNation is if I can I will attach our ratinds in the next screen.

Andres Aloi submitted media.

I Want To Know by Robot Garden

Black CaesarX

It fits well with the genre of music. Interesting comic additions although I thought the call outs may have been a little to excessive and only used where they would be of important value.

The track is fine although not your favorite, I believe this video would speak to the target audience your trying to reach.

Frame by frame graphics were well done I've done some before and it is painstaking, but work was spot on.

Overall because of the song not really hitting me 
╭∩╭∩╭∩ (︶︿︶)∩╮∩╮5THUMBS UP

yochay mocsari submitted media.

Black CaesarX

WOW Very well executed not much to say except for compliments on the film noir B&W camera work, which was excellent. Audio on my musicians customized stereo excellent as well as watching transposed to Wide Screen Display.

The two visuals I might change would be to have the room smokey from blowing Cigarette smoke around the man in the chair and rather than paper coming out of the box a thick colored smoke like a genie out of the box, like a secret emerald green vapor that knocks the guys out and wafts through the room.

╭∩╭∩╭∩╭∩╭∩ (︶︿︶)∩╮∩╮∩╮∩╮∩╮10THUMBS UP #KickAss✊™

Evan Tyler submitted media.

You're Hysterical Ft. Topless Literati by EVAN TYLER ft. Topless Literati

Black CaesarX

Ok now. I love the concept and how it was assembled. There are just a few studio touches I believe would put it over the top if you have either the finances or studio engineers to accomplish it. The vocal and instruments tracks along with the harmony are a little spacey. Not because I'm a former bass player but I really believe a nice thumping or droning bass would help hold the pieces together. If you check at about 3:58 into the song a keyboard kinda covers that as a midrange. The vocal of the female, harmony and music could be a little more upfront. The lead vocals are perfectly out front, but I feel the others I mentioned are a little far back or could be layered on more tracks behind the lead. Along with getting the general music a little more out front.

I think if you go for those additions I described and listen with head phones until it's pleasing to your ear to you'll find the pot of gold within this arrangement.

Over all I'll give it ∩╮∩╮∩╮∩╮(︶︿︶)╭∩╭∩╭∩ 7THUMBS UP

yochay mocsari submitted media.

No One I Know by Claus Zinger

Black CaesarX

Excellent work. Cinematic work is great, vocals, lighting, actors. Nothing I can say the whole piece works together engaging the mind.

An artistic masterpiece.

My highest rating before hitting the stratosphere 
╭∩╭∩╭∩╭∩╭∩ (︶︿︶)∩╮∩╮∩╮∩╮∩╮10THUMBS UP

Mark Christoper Lee submitted media.

Take Me Down to Oak Island by The Pocket Gods

Black CaesarX

Nice song but the lead vocal track is hidden behind the music no matter how I try ti EQ it. Some hopefully helpful advice if the lead singer is going to sing rather than rap or speak the words he's going to need to learn to stay on key or take vocal lessons.

Even if it was purposely done that way the intonations go in and out on and otherwise really good musical composition. If that was improved I would have played this out to my ReverbNation radio channel with permissions of course 

Luke Domozick submitted media.

Insurance by Luke domozick

Black CaesarX

Agreed with @DGrant Smith. This is a real nice country sounding track and I can give you a personal buddy of mine in North Carolina that would affordably give you a great sounding studio master, that has done this work since the 60's with many greats besides being friends with George Benson for helping that guitar track and vocals. "Jeff Grimes Music" 110 N John St Goldsboro, NC 27530 studio 919-580-0780 Cell 919-922-9523 tell him Carlos Demetrice Everett the drummers videographer told you to call and get a special price.

Carlton Carpenter II submitted media.

03-11-15 by Crescendo Forever Entertainment

Black CaesarX

WOW my highest rating so far ∩╮∩╮∩╮∩╮∩╮(︶︿︶)╭∩╭∩╭∩╭∩╭∩10THUMBS UP
I'm going to assume from the pretty picture you maybe the guitar player? Because the vocals could smoke this tune but a essentially non-existent.

However this is a smoking addicting juxtaposition of a Spanish flavored syncopated beat beat and I simply love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! If I had the tune I would put it out on my ReverbNation radio and let the whole world hear as we're about Number 1200 across all genres and Number 200 in Hip Hop Globally kudos.

morland gryder submitted media.

know you know me by Clast

Black CaesarX

Hey not much to say here. I'm impressed by the innovative qualities of both the song and the video. So much so you can see it here, on our CPirateNetwork and promote it out to your fans if we can tag you in twitter in the next dialogue: ▶

This is what we do on Fluence and would be happy to work with you and have you as an Fluence client. ^BCX

Precious Child submitted media.

I Fall by Precious Child

Black CaesarX

BCX Rating: ∩╮∩╮∩╮(︶︿︶)╭∩╭∩╭∩ 6THUMBS UP

Loved the dissonant notes in this. Overall very well put together in mood of visuals and music in the dark somber setting.

Only 2 small pieces I felt out of place the what looks like coffee machine either out of place or not shot, framed well and the drawing on the medicine bottle could have had somewhat better graphics to work. It did work well on the utility blade. However all said and done I'm going to launch this to my Worldwide Network CPirateNetwork So tell all your fans and get #social ▶ 

Alessandro Morgan submitted media.

Black CaesarX

Only takes me about 16 seconds to know if a song is good or not. Starts out a little reminiscent of Crosby Stills & Nash for me then goes country pop. Not bad not much work to do here seems radio ready.

Chevelle O. Ryan submitted media.

BELLA (Prod. NYGE1) by Chevelle O. Ryan

Black CaesarX

WHOA!!!!!!!!! 👊👊👊👊 (︶︿︶)👊👊👊👊8 Fists UP #BlackCaesarX Is there anymore I need 2 say???? Naaahhhhh Son

David Rosen submitted media.

Black CaesarX

Going to have to disagree with Jennifer it does have a complete structure and ending as a soundtrack. Nice little bass hook type of mini solo in the middle (being a bass player OF COURSE I"M PARTIAL TO BASSES). No worries on the "Who Ha" your on the right track, great as a meditative driving song and of course in the future I wouldn't mind some over the top Jimi Hendrix type of Guitar licks up in there! On the whole 👊👊👊👊 (︶︿︶)👊👊👊 7 Fists UP #BlackCaesarX Rated

Zoink$ submitted media.

Black CaesarX

Not a bad track to work with. Has more of a Jazzy feel, so here your vocals need to really be in time to the rather difficult syncopated rhythms. I can suggest you try a little more of a smoother approach to your vocals. This is more of a poetry, spoken word kind of piece and just follow the downbeat of the drum and let it flow man. 

Tony Bednar submitted media.

Woman of ARU by Crashing Hotels

Black CaesarX

This is nice was just looking around and am going to throw this on our Network ▶ #

Fluence Team submitted media.

For the Creative Community by The Fluence Team

Black CaesarX

Showing the beginning content on paper does not work well. Better is to show the same content on a computer screen as the work after does. It gives it a better feel.

yochay mocsari submitted media.

I Went Down The Road Today by Claus Zinger

Black CaesarX

The song is very well constructed. And being from an art and music background since 1964 I tend to look at the entire picture and feeling, not focusing much on lyrics, so as a complete unit the piece works quite well.

To embellish on the haunting ambiance of the music, I really believe the vocals on this track should be with a fair amount of echo as if coming from afar, in the ambient distant so that they fir in the dimensionality of the rest of the work. If you can keep the edginess of the voice while sending the vocals through an echo chamber I think you'll find your fans seriously fired up by that effect. Try a version like that and gauge the effects on SoundCloud as your test bed.

Overall I've got ╭∩╭∩╭∩ (︶︿︶)∩╮∩╮∩╮6THUMBS UP