That was pretty fuckin rad. I did not expect the hip hop flow after the industrial beat kicked it off. You have a cool unique sound and a strong lyricism. I would suggest adding a bit more to your bio so we can better understand both you and your influences. The press quotes are nice, but don’t offer any background. People want a story with their art, so give them one. I would also suggest working on the chorus in between your verses on future tracks. With music like yours, you’ll want something catchy that people can sing along to. Find that hook that gives power to your poetry. Keep creating and have fun. If the music is great, people will share it. Feel free to submit more as it comes along. Best of luck. Cheers.