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Artist from Chicago Illinois
- chicago, Il
Essem! Thanks for sending this. I hope you are doing well. As I always do on here, I will give my thoughts in two areas 1. Creative and 2. Technical. 1. Creative. I think you are on to something here with the overall feel. And there are highlights in the singing and highlights in the rap verse but I think they have some room to grow. I see you have these pieces to a puzzle but they are not quite fit together as well as they could be. I’d suggest working with a vocal producer/arranger to focus on whats working and rework the weaker parts. I always love a sad song so I see the potential here!!! 2. The mix is ok. I might assume you used a two-track beat which is cool. The vocals sound recorded well but could be dulled down a bit to fit the vibe. Maybe be a bit more selective as to when and where to use effects which a good vocal arranger/producer could help with as well! As far as promotion, I would recommend getting the song at its best before moving to that part of the process. I hope this helps. Feel free to ask any more questions if you have any! Take care and atay in touch!