Another good here, I dig the lyrics, the thought process which you don't always hear from a female perspective. These songs are definitely infectious and you should consider collaborating with other more established songwriters or producers to see if they can lead you in new directions but again I think you're on the right track here.
Cara thank you for reaching out and submitting. Starting out the mix on the record sounds like it could use some work. There is some mud coming in on the low end. The bass line sounds like it needs to come down in the mix to clean that up. I see you said that this is a demo though so I'm sure the producer/engineer knows what to do. Other than that the other elements sounds clear crisp and wide. The vox are sitting in a nice place as well. I like the vocal performance and the lyrics are clever and interesting. Melodically there is some good ear candy within the composition. The track itself shows some solid musicianship and the melodies are fun and energetic. The added sax gives things a nice dimension. I do feel like the arrangement feels kind of thrown together though. I'd like to hear an arrangement that has some more cohesiveness overall. Overall a solid record that would work well for TV/Film syncs. I'd like to hear some more material if possible please email me at email@example.com
Solid, catchy pop song here that def has a summer vibe and contemporary sound. I dig the beat a lot, especially the horns peppered in. It does sound more like a Europ pop hit than an American one to me but that's not a bad thing. The rap verse was the weakest point of this song in my opinion and should've been longer and more involved or not included at all as it was just there for a brief period then immediately forgotten. But overall I think you're going in the right direction!