James I really like where this is going. This is good to hear in the world of music that is dominated by other genres of music. My main concerns are two things. 1. A better mix would really give this song a better chance of attracting more listeners. There are cool Elements that could be heard better with a better mix. 2. There are a few timing issues that start around 3:45 in a section that repeats a few times mostly between guitars and drums. Consider looking into some indie licensing companies that might take on this song for potential license in tv, film, or digital content. Hit me up of you have any more questions for me.