I can't profess to be any kind of expert in hip hop but I know what I like. That being said, I was sucked in by the production and the lyrics by this one. Next you submit something to somewhere, it might be cool to include the lyrics. There's a lot going on here and it would be cool to be able to study exactly what you're saying. That will make the message more powerful. Make sense? What's the next step? A mixtape? A full CD?