This is an awesome track but its a little long. I would maybe consider releasing as a 2 part mini EP or something because there are enough ups and downs in the track/video to break it up and tell more of the story. At 2:20 when it mellows out for a minute I already thought that was the intro to another track so maybe consider putting a little more substance in the first part and then working to make 2:20 to the end its own really dope song. Overall I thought the video was cool and the track is SO close to being there but the presentation just needs a few finishing touches to really make it unique. Keep at it man!