I actually enjoyed this track but I don't think it's perfect. The lyrics are very personal and real, while the the hook adds a catchy flare to the record, although I still think it will be "boring" to some. The sampled instrumental sounds great, especially the beat change before the hook - nothing to change there. The beginning of the second verse was a bit off-beat but that's something that improves with experience. Keep it up!
Love the sample/production, the melody on the chorus, and for the most part, the bars. The second verse was a bit too off-kilter flow wise, but keep working and you'll eventually put it all together.
This might be one of the few instances where a rapper/singer's rapping is more preferable to me. Something about your voice is a bit nasally, and it makes your melodies off-putting to me, personally. Beyond that, the production is nice, the verse was strong to me, but I would've like another 16, it felt short (and, i mean, it was haha). Keep working though, it's not like you're a struggle artist or anything, just have to focus on your strengths!