WOW! What a trip. track really took me on a ride, sonically. Not too short or too long, either & you came in at about 1:04 hard on vocal! I would only suggest on the production that you pull vocals out front a bit more; love the ambient background, but really would've liked to connect more with lyrics. Solid start. Would listen to this artist more.
Love the beat and the dark atmosphere on this track, only complaint is that it feels a bit too short. I like that you're working on a visual aesthetic but feel the art could pop a bit more and looks a bit amateur. The line in the description about it being unclear whether this will be on his debut mixtape is a bit weird too as I don't see what that accomplishes. You should work on getting the mixtape out and perhaps making a music video or two from the upcoming release for further exposure. Keep up the good work, this did sound refreshing and original.
Sonically pleasing...the hook was a bit aggravating BUT I understand the lingo. Verses were on point and the track is top flight. Well done overall. I'm adding a brief review on TheHypeMagazine.com in "Rhyme Report."
This song is really not my genre specialty or interest. I can tell you have talent, more than me. So rock on, but not sure I can give you any good feedback. Have you sent this to Sahpreem King?https://fluence.io/sahpreem-king or Andrew Nast https://fluence.io/AndrewNast?